In
a town of Trois-Cents, a regular customer of the bar Credit Gone West, BrokenGlass sets out to write a book about odd characters he encounters on the bar,
and tells theirs and his own story, jotting down them in a notebook, however he
likes, and this is the story produced, a one long sentence without even a
full-stop. Stubborn Snail, the owner of the bar, wants the fame and legacy of
his bar to be written down and those who think their story is special wants
their space in the book, and apparently all those are patrons of Credit Gone
West, and all have their backstory, some confessed, other observed.
The
first part of the book traces the precarious origin of Credit Gone West, and the
puns surrounding it find its way into politics, creating jokes and satires on ordinary
people, crowd culture, and the references the author has used for humour,
crossing national and cultural boundaries, makes the description vivid and
enjoyable. The whole drama around the bar's establishment—the concoction even involving
the government, and Stubborn Snail's resistance and victory—is too great an
opening.
"… I’ve always hated
intellectuals of all kinds, because it’s always like that with intellectuals,
they talk and talk, but nothing concrete ever comes out of it, only more and
more discussions about discussions, then they quote some other intellectuals
who said this, that, or the next thing, and who saw it all coming, and then
they have a good scratch of their own navels, and they think everyone else is
stupid, and blind, as though no one could get through life without
philosophizing, and the problem is, these pseudo-intellectuals, they
philosophize without actually living, they know nothing about life, and life
goes on anyway, following its own course, countering all their second-rate
Nostradamus predictions, and they all go round congratulating each other, but
what you notice is, pseudo-intellectuals all love suits, and little round
glasses, and ties, because an intellectual without a tie is basically stark
naked, incapable of proper thought, but I’m proud of how I got here, I did
things myself, I’m a self-made man,"
One
of the odd characters is the Pampers guy, a man who was fond of visiting Rex
District (probably a Red-Light District), locked out by his wife, who ends up
in Prison and is sodomised by fellow inmates… and now a patron of Credit Gone
West, who earnestly wants to be in the book by Broken Glass, our off-beat
narrator. Description also sometimes turns to bawdy, but laughter is all that
matters. Another guy is the Printer, who claims “I’m telling you, Broken Glass,
if you don’t put me into your book, it won’t be worth the paper it’s written
on, I tell you, they could make my life into a film,”, a man who had once
settled with a white French woman, worked like a boss, had an easy going life,
whose life suddenly turned upside down upon arrival of his long unknown son,
and who was thrown into an asylum… and now brags that he's great story to tell,
because unlike others, "he's done France" and relishes on the copy of
Paris Match.
In
another episode, Stubborn Snail tries to impart some joy to Broken Glass—sixty-four
years old man—and suggests trying his luck with Robinette, also an alcoholic,
known to be the piss queen of the town, and Robinette contesting with a
newly arrived high-life bragging guy turns unexpected. The first part of the novel
is jolly, stylistic, and compilation of idiosyncratic traits and tales of all
these characters.
"…I trusted you, I told you about
my life, and you just make fun of me, you say the file’s closed, I know deep
down you’re laughing at me, give me that book, I want to read it, if you don’t
give it to me things are going to get nasty between you and me, and I want you
to rub out everything you’ve written about me, I don’t want people to know my
story”
In
the last part of the story, the similar style of narration follows, and now Broken
Glass tells us his own personal and saddening story. Once an instructor, Broken
Glass recalls his childhood days and his fond of reading books from all around
the world. And he spins the story, on how he lost his mother, lost his job,
lost his wife only to find himself broken and at the mercy of alcohol at Credit
Gone West. In these ramblings, he gives away his character, what kind of man he
is, and what doesn't he care at all and on what he sticks to always. All
through the text we find allusions or even direct mentions of writers and book
titles, that suggests Broken Glass found happiness reading literature and
wanted to be associated with it, but could never make himself a writer, but luckily
Stubborn Snail's proposition has brought back the urge, nevertheless he doesn't
want to be pedantic, neither concerns himself with willful coherence, and
enjoys the freedom writing in a stream of conscious way.
"…I must be off now, my place is
in paradise, and if some cheating angels go telling lies up there to stop me
entering by the great wide gate, well, believe me, I’ll get in anyway, through
the window”
Broken
Glass, is too self-absorbed, particularly about memories of his mother. The
tragedy befallen on many characters, including our narrator, though cannot be
so heartrending, since we doubt whether or not we can be their emotional
followers. Are we to trust these drunken ramblings? May be, but time has
changed them, and alcohol has blurred their self. But, their lives are not jinxed,
they hope to continue, but the ways are scrambled. What are we to make of all
these? The story, slyly composed, is irreverent in every manner, and African
literature with post-colonial mark or struggling identity should not be
expected of this. Unruly work of art, humour at its heart and off-beat
narration at the surface, the novel is able to satiate a reader.
Author: Alain Mabanckou
Translator: Helen Stevenson
Publisher: Softskull Press
Page Count: 162
Price: $16.95